In English today we looked at a poem called 'Hands'.
We looked at the structure and have written our own versions based on either: hands, feet, mouth or eyes.
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mouths
kissing
blowing bubbles
spitting and eating
chewing and licking
swallowing and drinking
slurping and burping
talking and shouting
whispering
blowing kisses
mouth to mouth
mouth
mouth
snoring in bed
eating and drinking
talking and moaning
kissing and lipping
shouting and whispering
mouth smiling
mouth
feet.kicking and jumping
running and stumping
hopping and skipping
dancing and tip toeing
walking and slipping
feet
walking
wiggling toes
strolling and running
dancing and jumping
kicking and stomping
stamping and marching
jogging and tapping
feet walking
feet stamping
feet
feet.
jumping and hoping
flicking and kicking
stomping and stomp
marching and stamping
running and tripping
stepping and skipping
amble and pace
strolling and rolling
feets
Eyes
searching in rooms
looking and finding
blinking and sleeping
staring and wondering
Eyes
Mouth Mouth shouting screaming in pain smiling and sucking eating and biting drinking and speaking mouth.
Feet
walking
splashing in sea
running and jumping
Tip toeing and tapping
hopping and leaping
running and kicking
rolling and strolling
feet
Mouth
Shouting
hissing and kissing
eating and drinking
talking and whispering
screaming and beaming
mumbling and muttering
humming and singing
gossiping and nattering
shout with volume
mouth
Mouth mouth speaking screaming in pain smiling and sucking eating and biting drinking and shouting mouth
mouth
screaming and shouting
blowing bubbles
talking and smiling
lathing and shouting
screaming and smiling
snoring and lathing
say roud things and shouting
eyes
eyes
crying and looking
waking and sleeping
crIYing and looking
waking and bLLNKing
feet
walking
splashing in sea
running and hopping
marching and stomping
stepping and skipping
flipping and tripping
strolling and rolling
pad and pace
four the race
Feet
splashing in sea
jogging and hopping
running and kicking
feet and beating
marching and stomping
eyes
exploring
glaring and staring
blinking and winking
opening and closing
watching and seeing
eyes
Mouth
brushing
Drinking in Water
Eating and munching
yawning and snoring
brushing and cleaning
spiting and crunching
talking and yawning
eating and drinking
shouting and wisping
kissing and chatting
talking with the Mouth.
Georgia wrote the above anonymous comment. Unfortunatly her laptop would only let her click 'Anonymous'!
mouths
kissing
blowing bubbles
spitting and eating
chewing and licking
swallowing and drinking
sluping and burping
talking and shouting
whispering
blouing kisses
sacring and shouting
these sound good i wonder if we are going to do them soon erm they sound a bit like opposites to me
Kirsten,
Thank you for reading our poems. We had a great time writing them. I am sure you will be writing one in English next week - I hope we have given you lots of good ideas!
great poems i hope we do them next week i like them all lots i cant wait to do them!
NADHRA I LIKE ABOUT YOURS BECAUSE I,TS GOT WRITE SPELLING
I really enjoyed making these im sure blue class will.
i like liams and aillies poom
I Like Ailie and Liam poem because it is funny.
I like Shadia poem because it is nice.
I like Liam and Ailie poem because it is funny.
I Like Liam and Ailie poem because its it funny to read.
we got to choose either feet mouth or eyes and i picked mouth heres the poem
mouth
talking
speaking in different languages
eating and chatting
drinking and chattering
crunching and munching
smiling and lying
licking and tricking
yapping
shouting at another
mouth
hi hands are fun it was a fun English lesson i love English.
This is my poem
Mouth
mouth
speaking
talking to people
shouting and screaming
laughing and joking
chatting and chewing
smiling
mumbling to people
mouth.
eyes blinking looking and seeing saring and glaring moving and spotting twickling and shining flashing inspecting people eyes
mouth
mouth talking
crunching and munching
biting and chatting
smiling and frowning
yawning and kissing
miming and singing
licking and drinking
mouth
by rahimul kobir
eyes
gazing and detecting
watching and spotting
looking and staring
observing and glaring
discovering new things
eyes
looking around
eyes
mouth
rapping and yapping
smiling and lying
talking and chewing
chattering and whispering
gobboling and crunching
munching and biteing
licking and drinking
yapping mouth
mouth
Mouth
chewing
eating sweets
shouting and screaming
smiling and laughing
calling and whispering
yelling and mumbling
talking and chatering
shutting and opening
quite
eating food
mouth
mouth
talking
kissing and smiling
laughing and eating
shouting and yelling
whispering and chatting
breathing and blowing
chewing and licking
loud
saying nice things
mouth
feet
moving
kicking a stone
jumping and spiking
dancing and running
walking and smelling
sponging and muching
sitincking and hoping
standing and star jumping
lifting
tip toeing
stilie
feet
Eyes
blinking in different directions
observing and spotting
staring and glaring
gazing and liking
eyes.
eyes
seeing
looking in different directions
spying and detecting
moving and observing
staring and glaring
gazing
inspecting peaple
eyes.
Eyes
BLINKING
LOOKING AND SEEING
STDING AND SPOTTING
MGVING AND SPOTING
FIASNING
INSPECTING PEOPLE
EYES
JASON
Mouth
mouth
speaking
talking to people
shouting and screaming
breathing and blowing
laughing and joking
biting and gnawing
chatting and chewing
smiling
mumbling to people
mouth
feet
smelling
sniffing and walking
jogging and kicking
running and wiggling
skipping and jogging
stamping and stinky
putting and wearing
treading moving
feet.
feet
smelling
snitching and walking
jumping and dribbling
skipping and kinking
jogging and shuving
running and wigelling
tredding
stamping in sand
feet.
eyes
looking
inspecting and detecting
blinking and moving
stering and seeing
Mouths
talking
chewing on sweets
talking and joking
shouting and screaming
laughing and biting
mummbling and babbling
singing and whispering
blowing
singing songs
mouths speak
mouths.
Mouth
licking
eating and chewing
mumbling and chattering
bitting and nibbling
kissing and shouting
smiling and grin
talking and gobbling
mouth
i like Liam and aillie
i like Cory;s Because he
done lots of correct
spelling words
DEAR Leah
I really enjoyed your poem Leah because you used lots of interesting words.
i like and the spelling is rght
DEAR Zack
i really liked your poem because my eyes are feeling like they are going to explore ,blink and wink and lots more !
Liam and Ailies mouth was nias and i think thay sod not pout kissing twias and thay don the coract spalings
Shadiaiaes mouth powaman was very good and ecsalant.
Leahas feet powam was nis to read and vary good
Habbeabs feet powam was exalant.
Mollys powam was lovely.
Joe kas poam was goargas and nias.
Dear Alice,Molly and Mark,
I really like your poem because there are lots of opposite words e.g eating and drinking there are also rhyming words e.g
hissing and kissing.
Cory's poem is the best i really like it it's nice.
Dear Zack
I really liked your eyes poem.I like it where you said blinking and winking because it's got the inking part.
I also like the opening and closing part.
I like nathans it is fun
Dear habeeb
i really like your poem it explain how feet moves.
i like Alice poem
hi it is a grat englsh leson i love!!!!!!
hi i like these poems and they are great.
i like Ailies and liams poem its really like a poem its good and i thinkits one of the best of eney ones here!!!!!!!!!!!
i like Liam and Ailie coz its nice to read
Hand
flicking
sqashing oranges
claping and clicking
snaping and bracking
waving and shacking
scatching and shaping
writing and cuting
holding and droping
tricking
grabing
mouth
I liked all of the poems.
I liked all of the poems.
I liked when we talk about a pudding like a night on the sea because we talk about 1. inventing
comers. 2. 1of4. 3. new spicer
new line because we talk about it
antill we/I knowed it.
i realy enjoied making these
im sure blue class did
i liked Edwards poem because he used flicking and squashing and things that are stonger words than others. :)
The poems they are really good I liked them all.
The poems were GREAT!!!!!
Mouth
sucking
licking lollies
screaming and shouting
crunching and munching
chatering and talking
laughting and smiling
eating and drinking
blowing
whispering
mouth
i like Liam and Ailies poem because they put a lot of detail in the work
i really liked the way Habeeb connected jumping and hoping.
i really liked the way molly thought of hissing and and kissing it rymes
Dear Liam and Ailie,
I really like your poem.I love the slurping and burping because it rhymes.
I love the end bit mouth to mouth.
Your poem is fantastic!
i love all of these poems
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